Before I answer your questions, let me first
just give you my own critique of the site. I'm blunt, so never be offended with
my critiques. I just tell it like I see it and I'm merely critiquing the site and
NOT you. Keep that in mind please.
At first glance, I like the look of the site.
Looks professional and clean. But I'm assuming your goal is to make money. So, the
first thing I see at the very top is your name "Andy and Sharon Mazon, ABR".
Who cares!?.... I (being a potential customer)
don't care who you are yet. Tell me what you can do for ME. Tell me how this site
will benefit ME. Your headline and slogan has to have some benefits and explain
what you do.
Something like "How To Find Quality Real
Estate Property In Phoenix". I just came up with that in 2 seconds, but you
get the point.
Next, I see this big image of "Professional
Services" ... of what? Again, it doesn't say anything to me. Hence, a waste
of space. The site isn't about you, it's about your clients and customers and what
YOU can do for THEM.
Next is the contact info ... you have your cell
phone listed. Fine ... then you have your HOME number listed. Why? Better to have
an "office" number. And where is the email address for contact? (I know
it's all at the very bottom of the page, but that's the wrong place for it).
Then we move further down the page where it lists
your name and links about "featured homes" and "buyer/seller tips".
I like that area because that's useful information for someone looking to buy a
home. Good, keep it.
Next we have a few paragraphs about who you are
and what you do. Fine ... too bad it's so far down the page. I would actually have
one quick paragraph at the top "this is what we do, here's how we can help
you, and click here to read more about us" and then you have a link to another
page about some background info about you with benefits and so forth.
Now here's where all the junk begins ... near
the bottom you have all of these banners. YUCK! Why ... what's the point. I hate
banners. They draw attention AWAY from your site and make it look ugly. Get rid
of them!
And now, at the very bottom we finally see your
contact info. Too much searching for important information like that. Better to
simply have a link at the top that says "contact us" and it leads to another
page with your phone, fax, cell, email address, ICQ, IM or however else you want
them to contact you.
I'd put up pictures of both of you as well. In
real estate, this is important and people can better identify.
So those are my thoughts on your home page. This
isn't a super detailed critique. But with just these small alterations you will
have a much improved website in both function and attracting clients.